The first thing I need to point out is how much I LOVE how you used both eyes. Moving on, I like the frosty eye better. A lot of your eye arts use warm colors like yellow and red, but frosty blue + white are something different. The frosty eye goes very nicely with the eye color, but the mascara looks a little messy; still amazing though! I also like how the make-up around the eye isn't heavy, which makes sense because it's just a frost effect. I must admit that I LOVE the "frosty summer" idea; putting a cool snow-like vision next to warm summer colors. One of my favorite things about the summer eye is how the red eye-shadow blends into the yellow, giving is a light sunrise effect, though I don't see how the stars fit in. Oh, and I like what I'm guessing are rays of sun coming out of the eye.
'What you doin'?' 'Not much, just painting my eyes to gain respect from the web' 'Cool, how are you doing it?' 'Oh, it's going to be AMAZING. One eye, right, will be all, like, blue, so it's all, like, ice, or, like, snow, yeah? And the other, left, is gonna be, like, all gold and yellow, so it's all, like, summer, y'know?' 'Aw yeah mate, sounds well cool, like a crazy juxtaposition between fire and ice to highlight the transience of the seasons, and how this then reflects onto the brief, changing, nature of our humanity, like a rejection of predeterminism, stating in a somewhat post-modern manner that no-one can clearly predict the future. So ground-breaking.' 'Yeah... that's what I was going for' 'Nice, let me know who it's going' 'Ok'
A short time passes
'AAAAHH FUCK!' 'What, what's happened?!' 'I'VE GOT PAINT IN MY EYE! AHHH IT BURNS WITH THE INTENSITY OF A THOUSAND FIRES!' 'Isn't that the point?' 'THE FUCK ARE YOU ON ABOUT MAN? I THINK I'M GOING BLIND!' 'I feel that creating a burning sensation in your eye, when you are attempting to highlight the transience of humanity's summer with a juxtaposition of fire and ice is somewhat ironic, if not underling your point' 'Thanks man that's really helping GET THE PAINT OUT OF MY EYE OW OW OW' 'Dude, just like run it under a tap or something' 'Alright, crisis over' 'Finished yet?' 'I was nearly done, but now it's dripped down my cheeks a little bit, sort of like I've been crying in a really weird way' 'Just leave it man, no-one will care, even if they notice' 'You sure?' 'Yeah, just leave it' 'Alright then. Say, could you come over and take picture of my eyes?' 'Sure, anything for a pal'
A short time later
'Hey man, here I am... uh, why are you naked?' 'Am I? Oh, how embarrassing, well since the pictures only of my eyes it doesn't really matter anyway...' 'I suppose not... well then, let's get this post-modernism over and done with... hold still... alright... there we go. I'll just upload that then.' 'Do you want to stay for coffee?' 'Okay, but not too long, because, I have to go, and like... you're naked' 'Well I thought if we were going to be properly post-modern, why not question how one drinks coffee?' 'Well, yeah, but you're sort of missing the poi-' 'I mean, who's to say that one can't drink coffee engaging in coitial relations with a clase friend?' 'Well, yeah, wait, hang on, I'm not really comfortable with thi-' 'I rather think you'd be more comfortable without those heavy clothes...'
And so on.
But I digress.
Don't those stars irritate your eyes? And what happens if you blink?
Cool concept!! But just one thing: I think the frosty eye's colors blended a little better than the summer eye's. Maybe a little more orange would made it blend more...? I STILL LOVE THIS, THOUGH <3
I really like how you brought out the bit of gold in the left eye with the sun rays. You also did a great job of accenting the right eyes all blue color. I see the difference.
Moving on, I like the frosty eye better. A lot of your eye arts use warm colors like yellow and red, but frosty blue + white are something different. The frosty eye goes very nicely with the eye color, but the mascara looks a little messy; still amazing though! I also like how the make-up around the eye isn't heavy, which makes sense because it's just a frost effect.
I must admit that I LOVE the "frosty summer" idea; putting a cool snow-like vision next to warm summer colors.
One of my favorite things about the summer eye is how the red eye-shadow blends into the yellow, giving is a light sunrise effect, though I don't see how the stars fit in. Oh, and I like what I'm guessing are rays of sun coming out of the eye.
'Not much, just painting my eyes to gain respect from the web'
'Cool, how are you doing it?'
'Oh, it's going to be AMAZING. One eye, right, will be all, like, blue, so it's all, like, ice, or, like, snow, yeah? And the other, left, is gonna be, like, all gold and yellow, so it's all, like, summer, y'know?'
'Aw yeah mate, sounds well cool, like a crazy juxtaposition between fire and ice to highlight the transience of the seasons, and how this then reflects onto the brief, changing, nature of our humanity, like a rejection of predeterminism, stating in a somewhat post-modern manner that no-one can clearly predict the future. So ground-breaking.'
'Yeah... that's what I was going for'
'Nice, let me know who it's going'
'Ok'
A short time passes
'AAAAHH FUCK!'
'What, what's happened?!'
'I'VE GOT PAINT IN MY EYE! AHHH IT BURNS WITH THE INTENSITY OF A THOUSAND FIRES!'
'Isn't that the point?'
'THE FUCK ARE YOU ON ABOUT MAN? I THINK I'M GOING BLIND!'
'I feel that creating a burning sensation in your eye, when you are attempting to highlight the transience of humanity's summer with a juxtaposition of fire and ice is somewhat ironic, if not underling your point'
'Thanks man that's really helping GET THE PAINT OUT OF MY EYE OW OW OW'
'Dude, just like run it under a tap or something'
'Alright, crisis over'
'Finished yet?'
'I was nearly done, but now it's dripped down my cheeks a little bit, sort of like I've been crying in a really weird way'
'Just leave it man, no-one will care, even if they notice'
'You sure?'
'Yeah, just leave it'
'Alright then. Say, could you come over and take picture of my eyes?'
'Sure, anything for a pal'
A short time later
'Hey man, here I am... uh, why are you naked?'
'Am I? Oh, how embarrassing, well since the pictures only of my eyes it doesn't really matter anyway...'
'I suppose not... well then, let's get this post-modernism over and done with... hold still... alright... there we go. I'll just upload that then.'
'Do you want to stay for coffee?'
'Okay, but not too long, because, I have to go, and like... you're naked'
'Well I thought if we were going to be properly post-modern, why not question how one drinks coffee?'
'Well, yeah, but you're sort of missing the poi-'
'I mean, who's to say that one can't drink coffee engaging in coitial relations with a clase friend?'
'Well, yeah, wait, hang on, I'm not really comfortable with thi-'
'I rather think you'd be more comfortable without those heavy clothes...'
And so on.
But I digress.
Don't those stars irritate your eyes? And what happens if you blink?
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