Wow. I believe this is one of the best eye pictures I've seen- the fly was a nice touch, and the petals are beautiful and vibrant. The eye shadow (and the fly!) brings out the color of the eye very nicely (Unless you have color contacts, but it still works!) I'm being a little picky here, but that shine on the bottom left bothers me a little. Maybe if you had dulled it a little where it meets your skin in the bottom left corner, you would've been perfect, but the shine on your skin draws my eyes away from your art a little, and hence isn't as good as it could've been.
That must have been so very painstaking and long to plan and place all that. The amount of time waiting for the photograph to get the right angle and everything else along with it. On the other hand, very gorgeous photo right there. Very vibrant and colorful and love the placement of the fly in there