Oh Society, sweet as sugar, shiny as gold, I see you crying out for death, as I take a look at your - CANDY EYES -
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I hope the picture and its criticism against our society is self-explanatory... Makeup and photo by me, Photoshop editing by my brother - take a look at his gallery, he is amazing!
This is a highly innovative picture. I am in -love- with all the shiny things you glued to your face for this picture. I'm pretty sure I would've gotten glitter in my eye e.e I like how the editing on the iris itself doesn't look fake. It looks like it should be that color naturally, and I think that is a pivotal part of making it a success. The eyelashes are beautiful as well. I would've never thought to use such simple things to make such a glamorous shot. You did wonderful, wonderful work. I think it deserves five stars all across the board.
The vision is truly magnificent, I love it. Though others have said that you should use foundation, I personally enjoy the skin not being so impossibly doll like. WHile I like the colors, and get there meaning, I think that they could have related more to each other. Perhaps making the colours on the leaves a little darker, or matching everything else? I would also suggest maybe a bit of gold touches, just a bit, in the white streaks below the eye. I must add though, that I absolutely love the beads on the eyelashes. Absolutely gorgeous. Maybe, instead of gems, you could have done pearls, like candy pearls! I also love the contact. Beautiful! Wonderful piece!
This is lovely! The leaves and crystals are absolutely beautiful, and I think the amount is perfect. It's easy to go overboard on these things (for me, at least), so the striking elegance of the image is all the more breathtaking. I'm a fan of your work. I found one of your eye make-up pictures first, and it was delightfully whimsical, so I looked at your gallery and found that you do some very nice work in other mediums as well. I love the excellent use of texture that appears in all your works. It makes them visually interesting and draws the viewer in a little deeper. Texture is difficcult to master, but you have done it and I admire you for that.
beautiful makeup. the only thing is, (you can't tell from far away) up close it's pretty obvious that the swirl is shopped, I would have feathered and blended it a bit more. at the same time, given the fact that this is about candy and artificiality, I think you can get away with leaving it like that too
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