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That would be soo cool!! ^^ 
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echt schön das bild ^^
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Deviousness `anmari has been spreading her infectious positivity throughout our community for over 6 years. Throughout this time Ana has been at the core of all things devious, passionately developing an eclectic gallery, helping organise devmeets, participating in chat events and also recently completed dedicating her time as a Community Volunteer. We are absolutely delighted to bestow the Deviousness Award for May 2013 to `anmari, congratulations! Read More
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wow...... ^o^ I really think that this is the best eye make-up ever. I found it when I was on Google looking at cherry blossom trees.... ans when I saw this picture I thought 'this really captures the beauty of cherry-blossoms'.
So basically I think this is the best eye make-up ever as it captures the beauty of cherry blossom trees.... and I wish I could do this to my eyes and other peoples eyes, but I would need to buy the make-up to do it! :3
I thought that this piece was beautiful, and I liked it more than the rest (though all of your artwork is beautiful). I agree with the last critique (LifeOfAnime) that this had outstanding originality. I know that a lot of work was put into this, as well as skill. Your technique is brilliant, I love the way the tree seems to come from the corner of the eye, and the petals are floating around, making it seem magical. The small smears of dark red paint on the upper eyelashes are excellent, because you put just the right amount of paint that it didn't look messy, or didn't look like you made a mistake of putting paint there. Overall, I thought this was wonderful. I cannot imagine why someone would report you for this piece of artwork.
However, though it is very elegant, there is one thing that I think would make it look better. If you don't think it looks good or it is risky, then that's fine.
When the tree seems to come ou tof the corner of her eye, after the tree gets slightly larger and branches come out, I thought that the tree's base was a little too wide. I'm not sure of you get what I mean, so I will explain a little bit further.
The tree is painted (Not sure if it is) at the corner of the eye, and the trunk lowers, it becomes wider and then the branches start to come out.
I think that the trunk could do a little more work, perhaps make it slimmer, but its up to you, so its fine by me.
But besides that small thing that I think could do perhaps a little bit better, the rest is beautiful and elegant.
You did a magnificent job.
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