You've done it again, Pixie. This is breathtaking! I love the pronounced cheekbones, her nose, her startlingly blue eyes, the side-swept bangs, the cute little blue dots around her hair, everything! Heck, I even like the way you shaped her ears! I honestly don't have any critiques or complaints about this painting!
And now, I really don't know what to say, and I've still got 30 words to use up! So, I will recite a Peacock Haiku.
Long feathery fans So beautiful when spread out Like eyes, all staring.
the drawing is very nice. the color is lacking; the tones in her cheekbones and eyes look very nice and deep, but the rest is flat. i think it would have looked better if you'd used more colors and shades in her hair, skin, and background. but it's very nice.